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Chapter 1, pg 8 (28 Jan 2015)

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They stop by a door and Nate looks reassuringly down at Victor. "Everything seems a bit scary now but it'll all be fine soon."

"Ready to see your dorm?" he asks, opening the door. "...Okay," Victor says reluctantly.

For a moment the light from inside surprises Victor.

We zoom in as his face brightens and a smile grows across his face. His eyes are filled with sparkles.

Present day. We stay zoomed in on his face. His smile and optimism: gone. Victor is all grown up and doesn't look happy about it; his hair is longer and even scruffier, he has deep, dark bags under his eyes, and his nose is broken. He looks pretty miserable.

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